Sunday, September 17, 2017

Shriya's Fair trade poster

This week we have been learning about Fair trade. Fair trade is a big world organisation .

I think Fair trade is a very good world organisation because they help poor farmers to get a equal amount of money.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017

Things families can do on a road trip


This week we have been reading The Reward it is about kids that kept calling out number plates.  I made a poster for what families can play in the car.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017

The three little pig's


The three little pigs

Once there lived three little pigs. They were always happy and they also had their own houses.They were all happy with their house’s. They also had houses that were made out of different things, like bricks ,straws and wood.  

One day they all went for a walk just to see what was going on in the neighbourhood. But then they all saw this awesome camping place, so they all went back home and got everything they needed because they decided to camp out for a few day’s.

So once they got everything they needed there they all went. When they all got there they were all so excited to start camping altogether because they all didn't see Shorthair very often because they all lived in separate houses. That was their first ever time going camping so they didn’t really know what to do but one of the pig’s decided to see if he had everything.

When he was looking through his stuff he didn’t see his tent,’’OMG I forgot my tent and don’t want to go back to my house,’’ said the pig that forgot his tent. So after a few day’s they all wanted to go back home, so they all packed their things and headed home. When they got home there was this wolf at their houses and he was trying to blow their houses down but the only house that survived was the brick house, so that means two didn’t survive.
     


The End

This week we have been writing fairy tales and we had to change our endings I changed my one to, after they came back from camping they saw this wolf trying to blow their house down but the only one that survived was the brick one.








Wednesday, August 9, 2017

Shriya's library rules


This week we read a story called Silent Reading. It was about these kids who come to the library and do the wrong things.

Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Where am I


Where am I

As soon as I walked through the doors my new life began. I smelt the nice coffee and food. Brrrrrrrrrr as soon as I walked outside my noise turned red and it felt so numb. Yay now we can start sliding and skating, “arrrrrrrrr I feel off my gliders” when I fell off I got stuck on the floor. Then when I fell my cousins started throwing snow at me

Thursday, August 3, 2017

Three way conference

Shriya

Three Way Conferences - Thinking Hats for Year 4-6

What are the facts about school?  What concepts have you learned about?  What have you been involved in?
Share a piece of work that you are proud of.  Talk about the process of creating it.  What new skills did you learn? What have you done well?  
What is an area that you need to improve in?  Share a piece of work that you found challenging. What do you need to do to improve?  Do you need some help?
Reading Age:8-9yrs
Writing Level:Beginning level 2

Maths strategy stage:4
Maths knowledge stage:E 5
Inquiry Topics:Taoga,Function’s
Extra Curricular: music lessons,gymnastics
Work I will share: Speech. When I got something wrong I went and fixed it
Work I will share: Maths. I think  sometimes don’t really understand things
What are your feelings about your learning?  What makes you happy at school?  Is there anything that worries you?
What are your thoughts about your learning?  How are you doing overall?
So what now?  Create some goals with your teacher and your parents. Is there something your teacher or you parents can help with? (these could be started at your three way conference and finished later).
I am very happy with my some pieces of my work all

My Strengths:When people say things to me

My Challenges: learning new things
By … I will have..

Ask for help when I don’t understand something



Thursday, July 27, 2017

Shriya's speech

Speech Judging Sheet

Name:Shriya                           
Topic: All classes should have a class pet                       
                   
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2           3           4           5
Structure

 
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
3
Delivery

 
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.
2
Content
 
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.
2
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)

Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.

1.14 mins

Next time I need to …

Make more eye contact


Teacher Comment
Shriya, you structured your speech well and made some eye-contact with the audience. Well done!